Literally this passage
describes the woman’s night after going to her friend’s house then leaving in
the darkness even if she knew everything in the neighborhood she still gets
lost.
The way this passage is
written is important because it is unique from lines before and after it
because it contains things such as juxtaposition within the strong imagery and
interesting use of language in places where there was a “–“ in-between words of
description towards the end of the passage.
The imagery builds the
understanding of the situation giving the reader the idea in the beginning that
her situation was bright even if there was no moon in the sky meaning that it
was literally dark but she was happily going over to her friend’s house knowing
how to get there by memory. But after leaving her friend’s house there was
nothing but the whole world around her and the world she had memorized by being
living there was gone and she got lost and was stranded in darkness. This can
be compared to her actual life even if it’s not clear she is describing and
making excuses as to the explanation of who she was and why she didn’t want Anton
to know before he understood what she did or what she was involved in meaning
she could have been the one to murder his parents.
In the idea that she is
describing her life the juxtaposition in the beginning of the passage is used
in a way that when she said the moon was not in the sky yet is was bright and
then when she leaves the friend’s house its dark and she is changed probably
because the conversation she had with the “friend” changed he and messed with
her mind so harshly that a place she knew how to get around with her eyes
closed was temporarily completely erased her memory or clouded it with the
topic and this cloud was so significant it absorbed all of her mental capacity.
And the use of the
“–“ in the end is used to emphasize the imagery that she described
showing that she knew every aspect and detail of the neighborhood that was
absorbed by the mental cloud of darkness that went from the brightness without
the moon to total nothingness besides the ominous clouds of conflict within
herself.
Avoid using words/phrases like "strong imagery" that don't add anything specific. Is it light/darkness imagery? Nature imagery? Be more specific. Be careful to avoid run-on sentences.
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